Sunday, 2 July 2017

I Want a Pet Bird

I chose a goal to do a persuasive peice of writing this term.I chose to do a persuasive piece of writing on getting a pet bird for practice.I tried to put alot of detail in it so I hope you enjoy it.

1 comment:

  1. Sage, this is an irresistibly persuasive letter. You have given good reasons for wanting and deserving a pet and thought carefully about your responsibilities in looking after it if you do indeed get one. I do like your choice of the word 'furthermore' for an additional reason.

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