I Want a Pet Bird

I chose a goal to do a persuasive peice of writing this term.I chose to do a persuasive piece of writing on getting a pet bird for practice.I tried to put alot of detail in it so I hope you enjoy it.

All About Me

Picture Sentence

This is my picture sentence. When I got these pictures I made sure these pictures were free to share so I wouldn't get in trouble. How to get a free to share picture from Google.
Step 1: type in what you want. And then you push on settings and it will come up with a few options.
Step 2: push on the option that says advanced search. It will bring you to a different page.
Step 3: at the bottom of the page it will say Not Filtered By Licence.
Step 4: click on that and it will say Free To Use And Share, Free To Use And Share Even Commercialy,Free To Use And Share And Modify, Free To Use And Share And Modify Even Commercialy.
Step 5: push on the top one Free To Use And Share. Then you push on Advanced Search right below at the bottom.

  

I LOVE TO PLAY THE PIANO

Making a Quality Comments

Tip 1:  compliments. Compliments always makes the student feel good about their post. For example your friend wrote something about a rain storm you could say that would have been hard to persist in that kind of rain.

Tip 2: information. Information is always good to add in a comment. For example say someone wrote about riding on a horse and you have had a lot of experience you could tell them a few facts that you know.

Tip 3: Connections. Making connections is another important Part of making a quality comment. To make connections you tell a story that has happened to you that connects to the story the person told.

Tip 4: questions. You should always put a question at the end of a comment. A good question should always be relevant to the story. So if the story is about an elephant don't ask a question about their dog!

Tip 5: Proof Read. Proof Read means to re-read the comment you have created. Make shore there isn't any spelling mistakes. or missed out words. 

My Avatar

My name is Sage. This is my avatar. I chose a purple dress because my favourite colour is purple. I have brown hair and green eyes.

                 

Candy Balloons

If I owned a shop I would want to own a candy shop so I could play with the kids that came to buy some candy then I would have lots of friends. I built a playground and whenever my friends came over we played on it.

I got out a sign that I had been waiting to get out for weeks. I hadn't taken it out before because right when I was about to get it out, one of my best friends had knocked on the door. I got out my hammer and nails…

and walked to the door. Just then my friend walked past. She said she was just running to the store to buy some groceries, then she was planning to come and help me with what I was doing.

Each day I bought pink balloons and helium machines full of helium. I got out my newest candy inventions, ones that weren't even on sale yet. I tested them very carefully and licked my lips. They were so good. Right then someone knocked on the door. It was my friend. She was back from the store and was ready to help. We put the candy into the balloons and soon it was all done. Soon my best friend was ready to leave and was about to walk out the door when…

Knock,knock. Someone was at the door. It was one of my other friends and she was about to have a birthday party. She needed some treats to share. So I said that I had just finished some Candy Balloons. I said bye to my customers and shut the door. Another day had finished.

This is my quick write. The topic was on if you owned a shop what kind and why?

highlights for 2016

school highlight. being an L.T.L and being able to choose what I want to do.   

sports highlight. Dancing in the dance concert. I also really enjoyed taking part in gym sport.

family highlight.learning how to do a cartwheel. Getting baptized.