Sunday 29 March 2015

The Pig Party At Silver pond

Slippy sloppy mud was everywhere by the silver pond. It was called silver pond because on the bottom there was shiny silver clay. It was muddy and deep. All of the pigs were getting ready for a party at the silver pond. A cook was in her kitchen making a gold
cake for the pig party!

She drove to the silver pond and swam to the middle and put the golden cake on the island. there.The cook was so happy she got the cake done because there was only one more day to go until the party!

A pond cleaner went to silver pond to clean it all up because it was completely dirty.The day came for the pig party at silver pond. Mud worms were everywhere with their tiny silver instruments.The pigs started to arrive with desserts. Pigs came in families. Some pigs were fat, some were skinny, some were little, some were large, some were happy, some were sad, some were grumpy and some were mad. Everyone wanted to meet people so they decided that they should dance. All the pigs danced amazingly until... they saw the golden cake.

They started to walk to the cake but they realized it was in the middle of the pond. Then everyone heard a trumpet coming towards them, it came closer and closer.Soon it came into view. It was the pig princess with her pig servants. She saw the cake and sent her servants to go and get it. All the pigs couldn't move or talk.The servants swam back and gave it to the pig princess. She started to eat it mmmmm,” she said.Then one pig went up to the princess and honked“Can I have some?” and the princess oinked “yes”. Then all the pigs went up to her and asked “can I have some?” and the pig princess oinked “yes” to everyone. They all yelled “yummmm“ together.




5 comments:

  1. This is a really creative story Sage. I liked that you had your plan beside you and used all your ideas, ticking them off as you went. A great system!

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  2. Hi Sage,
    I love your picture.
    It is so funny!
    I like to use fancy colours and font like you.
    Are you going to put more stories on your blog?
    If you want to get to my blog go to http://mercysmarvelousblog.blogspot.co.nz/
    Kind Regards,
    Mercy

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  3. Hi Sage, this is Grandma Miller. I love your story about the pigs and the silver cake. The princess was nice to share with all the other pigs. You are a creative writer. I wonder how you did the picture. I like it. Grandpa and I look forward to reading more of your blogs. We love you.
    Grandma

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  4. What a wonderful story Sage. I look forward to seeing more of your stories and thoughts.

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